Build A Story

this is a game lets build a story... this is how you do it... the first
poster will post a sentence and you will add a continuation in it until
it tells a story.. it has to make sense... ok lets start...

the story starts here... one scene per post...


Hanna was a beautiful girl and a good singer. she was walking in the forest one day while singing.

Until she saw a beautiful bird singing on a branch. She approached it and said,

"Hey little birdie."

the little birdie then turned into a little girl and warned her.

Little girl: be warned of a evil wich who sucks beauty of her victims.

Hannah wondered what the bird is talking about.

"Hm? A witch who sucks beauty from others?"

the little girl turned back into a bird without further explenation.

Hannah wonder what's with the bird, but she choose to ignore it.

And she turned around to go away when suddenly another bird fell from a tree.

She was shocked for a while by the surprise but then as the bird kept laying on the ground, she approached it to look at it because she was worried that the bird was injured.

She take the bird in her hand, and found that someone had break that cratures wing.

She decided to take it to her house to heal it.

But just before he reach her house, he notice that there were fire all over her house.

She quickly screamed and went to her house to see her family.

when she entered her house her family was dead.

(Awww...)

She was so sad and kept crying.

then a tall long haired with black & red coat man came and saw her crying.

She asked her what's wrong with her.

hanna stands up nd face's the tall man and said.

Hanna: my family died at the fire.

the man said.

Man: it's ok. then bites hanna in the neck.

Suddenly the bird that Hanna had put on the ground before got up from the ground and started flying around and screaming madly and hitting the man with its wings.

the man then let goes off hanna, hanna then falled to the ground.

Hanna injured her head, becoming unconscious afterwards.

hanna then woked up in a dark place.

Where she could feel her head paining.

hanna: huh! were am i.

hanna scaned the place and saw that it was a room. which is gothicly designed.

Out of curiosity, she explored the place and found something strange.

a big portrait of the man he saw. and more other portrait. she then recognize a picture that looked exactly like her.